Tuesday, November 3, 2009

'A Whisper' Comments

Rating: 3.5

'Hearts drunk in Love,
A whisper between the lovers,
At the silence of the night..'
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Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
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Maddii-Angel O'Leary 25 July 2010

Such a beautiful poem. Reminds me of the poetry my mother used to write.

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Emma Kessler 13 December 2009

Beautiful, the way you repeat 'A whisper' connects the poem and adds a sort of ominous and secretiveness to it.

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Danny H 04 November 2009

This is wonderful. i love how you repeat a whisper. like its a haunting and secretive phrase.

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