Monday, April 6, 2009

A Whisper Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within every heartbeat,
a whisper can be heard
for someone crying out for love
that isn’t always heard.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 14 April 2009

A beautiful poem about listening. So often we fail to hear what is crying out close by. I guess we're often too preoccupied with something else. Wise words, David. But then I would expect no less from your ever compassionate pen. Love, allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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This feels soft because of the word whisper, but in fact it sits nicely within your heartbeat and delivers a very important message to humanity. Top marks David!

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Muhammad Ali 06 April 2009

So much soft, high frequency poem by you friend 10

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