Tuesday, July 28, 2020

A Whimsical Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

Poetry is an excuse to dream.....
When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom
When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree
And heart swims like a swan down river!
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Valsa George
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 September 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river! ..........wonderfully beautiful..... :) , , , , ,10.

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Soran M. H 02 September 2020

Dear poet Valsa, hello and thanks for this wonderful poem, really you have picked up very attractive and powerful topic for you lovely masterpiece of work, these amazing poetic imagery are so beautiful and fresh, always your magical and rhetoric words unlocking hearts lying shut, well done and have a top mark 10++ * congratulations for being 270 on top 500 poets

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Soran M. H 02 September 2020

When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river!

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Khairul Ahsan 27 August 2020

'Poetry is an excuse to dream' - couldn't agree more! Poets are dreamers, scientists are doers.

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Anjandev Roy 13 August 2020

.........like a swan down river.......wonderful.....thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... As I configure words saying beyond what can't be said.....great write about poetry; excellently articulated

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Yes, the pain of configuring words to form a verse befitting the thoughts make us ambitious of a 'open sesame' capability.....10

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

................ With my feet on the ground and my head in the stars Oh! A dream of a strange poet...! do you see?

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

Very skilful in crafting powerful and rare poetic images. used a very poetic language to convey the message and the content to the readers. Well done, the dreams of the poet makes them feel optimistic.10/10 Excellent

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river!

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Indira Renganathan 01 August 2020

I do agree with you on poetry as an excuse to dream...but epic poetry all over the world, don't they stand as a proof of history and culture where the poets can dream to present the true facts only....always your style of writing has a magic....kudos Valsa

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Emotion goes off like ripe fruits. Configuring words a poet expresses his thought amazingly with beauty of his natural perception. The dream of a poet wonders us wandering in stars and far galaxy. A poet's dream is rich in both imagery and imagination. An excellent poem is very beautifully penned with interesting sequence....10

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2020

A wonderful poem Madam Valsa George as always!

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river! - - - - Yes, so truly said- - -Poetry is an excuse to dream.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2020

A beautifully crafted and well conveyed write that captures the wonders of Poetry. Heartwarming with great imagery.10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2020

Lovely and wonderful poetic expression. Yes, my friend, we can see the dream of a Poet. And that is where we draw our hopes and strength. No matter how hard life is and even only a few believe in what we write, Poetry can still extend its arms to give solace and utmost happiness.

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Subhadip says 28 July 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream. Well thought of

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 July 2020

Yes I do, I was just there playing with the swans down the stream. Beautiful poem and loved the imagery.10++

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