Tuesday, November 21, 2017

A While Comments

Rating: 5.0

I fought for just a glimpse,
Of a quiet space,
A while,
Where once I'd lived with daily,
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Sarah Persson
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2017

The peaceful becomes noisy as per change of time and again noisy place comes down to calmness and this becomes peaceful. Fighting for a while for a glimpse of a quiet space is amazing but very interesting. This is an excellent poem beautifully narrated...10

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Sarah Persson 21 November 2017

Thank you as always Kumarmani, for your insightful comments

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