Sunday, December 27, 2015

A Whiff Of Poison! Comments

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I see no one I love, I see no friend around,
All I see is deceptive souls and devious minds
A whiff of poison in the air
I see flowers bleeding
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Rob Lamberton 20 January 2023

"May the gems of loyalty sparkle again. May the breeze of goodness travel again." I'm glad the poison was not fatal!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 January 2022

A poignant poem! I will revisit with a meticulous review.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 July 2016

Hi Aaarzoo, Wafaa ke badle bewafaee is the order of our times! Beautiful poem reflecting human nature engulfed in bigotry!

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 20 February 2016

You are a great genius Aarzoo. you have a great way through your words and a deep insight about life, experience and your desires and wishes. every aspect of life that we come across can be found in your poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 January 2016

Oh! Deeply embedded; but, out there someone cares for you. Nice work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2015

I see flowers bleeding I wonder why the nightingales don't sing anymore Polluted hearts filled with acrimony Resentment deeply embedded in the soul Enmity in the name of friendship ...-oh beautiful observations and wonderful graphic. would you tell me from where do u collect such graphics. very very nice. thank you very much. tony

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 December 2015

I've a sketch in my mind and browse the net for the perfect picture which compliments my poem. Thanks a ton for appreciating my work.

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