A bull whale swims, under the water top
grazing the surface, to pop his pop
churning sounds all night - all day
hoping to met his mate, and swim away
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Another fabulous poem David, this is truly beautiful, very picturesque. I really loved it and will read it again and again. Thankyou-----Melvina
David... I truly enjoyed this poem. The flow was smooth and each peice of the poem came together perfectly. I give this a whoppin' 10! ! Keep that pen' a poppin'! =) Look forward to reading more of your work. Until then, Kristin
Delightful David, read like a Dance! ;) x A x