Thursday, May 18, 2006

A Whale In Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

A bull whale swims, under the water top
grazing the surface, to pop his pop
churning sounds all night - all day
hoping to met his mate, and swim away
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David Darbyshire
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Andie D 22 November 2006

Delightful David, read like a Dance! ;) x A x

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Melvina Germain 11 August 2006

Another fabulous poem David, this is truly beautiful, very picturesque. I really loved it and will read it again and again. Thankyou-----Melvina

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Kristin Davis 26 May 2006

David... I truly enjoyed this poem. The flow was smooth and each peice of the poem came together perfectly. I give this a whoppin' 10! ! Keep that pen' a poppin'! =) Look forward to reading more of your work. Until then, Kristin

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Duncan Wyllie 23 May 2006

Very entertaining in its nature Thankyou David Love Duncan X

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Tamara Moir 18 May 2006

I liked it David. So sweet.

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