A Whale In Love Comments

Delightful David, read like a Dance! ;) x A x

Another fabulous poem David, this is truly beautiful, very picturesque. I really loved it and will read it again and again. Thankyou-----Melvina

David... I truly enjoyed this poem. The flow was smooth and each peice of the poem came together perfectly. I give this a whoppin' 10! ! Keep that pen' a poppin'! =) Look forward to reading more of your work. Until then, Kristin

Very entertaining in its nature Thankyou David Love Duncan X

I liked it David. So sweet.