A Wet Summar Night (Being Inspired By Robert Murray Smith's Poem The Dark Night) Comments

Your poem's sensuous flow takes my breath away. This is a really fine poem, Akhtar

A highly sensuous poem ! A starry sky above and the moon trapped inside a blanket! Beautiful!

A beautiful romantic poem. The imagery puts the reader in a lively n romantic mood. Sensuousness abounds. A big 10.

A poem that immediately brought a pleasant smile on the lips, a great work.

I read his poem and now yours both are fantastic.....10 I quote: Many more, many more stars, A singular moon in a soft blue cover, Ecstatic wind her drunken guitars, Forget sky, what on earth discover!