Saturday, January 3, 2009

A Welcome Relief. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Patterns of drifting emotional stress
Caught at my heart, and, darkly disturbing
My mind, began winding through oppressive
Waves of distress. Defences fell, - fervent
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Fay Slimm
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Sid John Gardner. 17 January 2009

Quality writing from an accomplished poet.Thank you Fay, Sid xxx

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Kevin Wells 16 January 2009

One hundred percent agree with Viola's comment... This is poignant and one can join you in feeling the relief at the end of the verse. Heartfelt.

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Scott Austin 13 January 2009

Wonderfully penned, thank you for sharing your toughts with us. Scott

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Ron Flowers 07 January 2009

Very nice, Fay. Best wishes Ron

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Frank Cannon 06 January 2009

Its whispered dulcet tone released a sigh in me. Aaaahhhh.

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Robert Howard 05 January 2009

May the peace that this poem describes be your constant companion.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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