She stood there under the moon,
It is day.
Up on the hill where I live above the
Clouds it is dark.
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God Iwhich I don't believe in) could perhaps look at each other witihout negative consequences, BUT to have a conversation with Her/Him would probably not go well.
James, my 'old' friend, you have 'wasted' some apostrophes, using them where they do not belong in some plases in your poem. oops. : ) bri