Friday, June 1, 2012

A Weed And The Roses Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever seen a weed amongst the roses?
Striving and struggling to block out the sun from their precious petals
It is a pitiful sight of desperation of not greed or vanity
But seeking to be loved and admired by many
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Kevin Patrick 01 June 2012

tremendous work, with a really great subject matter that takes into consideration the idea the weeds have their own inner essence that should not be muted. Of course its also a wonderful metaphor, for people who exist on the outside of society and whose differences make them weeds to a homogenous and tribal culture that disenfranchises those who lack greater beauty.

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Dave Walker 01 June 2012

A great poem, really like it, a great write.

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