Friday, January 11, 2008

A Wedding At My Funeral Comments

Rating: 2.6

The time has not come before
And this is new.
The light is opening for the day
An ingénue displaying her bosom
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Robert Rorabeck
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Patti Masterman 12 July 2009

Love your descriptions of your affection and her reactions, so predictable. She seems very real, like a girl you must have known or wanted to.

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Rhea Anne Telog 02 February 2009

i like your poem...and it very good you wrote it from the heart

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okeydokey #3 21 January 2008

her lips lead to the grave right...this is an entertaining one...how do you do it man...

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Robert Rorabeck

Robert Rorabeck

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