Monday, October 17, 2005

A Web Of Lies Comments

Rating: 4.9

As I lay down in my bed
and cry
I realise
It was all a web of lies
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Sylvia Chidi
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David Desantis 28 May 2008

well the internet definately can be that way....we tend to play games on this thing....blow ourselves up, and tear ourselves down. It's true imagination at its finest. I wonder what yours was built on.

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Marci Made 13 July 2007

Boy you got this write but long before I came here.....I have been lied to, and than made to look like the liar as well as being accused of being one I'm not who wrote to people I don't know, well at least not as they're listed....Thank God, our lives are private here and few women put their current last name...Don't have to go into a chat room, you can get ripped apart here by one who knows all you know and therefore makes you the bad guy, even though, it was all in private....This tech world, even PH has a lot of excellent poets and one or more of the best are off their rocker as well, perhaps that is why they are as they are....isolation on line 24 hours a day for months...Who knows, never been in a chat room, but have been ripped apart in a forum as someone who I'm not.....Pathetic but your words just struck me on this one..... marci made.

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Melvina Germain 09 May 2007

The web certainly is a place for meeting people but one must be aware of the frauds out there. Your sends out an excellent message for all chat room lovers. Thanky Sylvia.---Melvina---

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Selcan Deniz 15 December 2006

this poem is really good keep it up ;)

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Bridgid Patrick 19 February 2006

I like the message in this. For all those chat room lovers. beware! ...good stuff..x

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