Buried in blue and yellow,
Beneath fire blankets
And a bold maroon comforter,
One sheet lumped in a corner,
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Congrats....and I wish you can find success in your book... Oh i have also made my booklet....So i dont post poems where again... It good read your work poet
Thankyou for the comment you left me. i found it to be a necessity to admire your own writings, and i must say that i was amazed and inspired instantly. please continue with your work. best wishes.
really awesome poem ~Romeo ^^ you are a very sharp observer of your life and yourself...passions on the poems are just amazing and seem ageless...sensitive heart towards the floating images that are around you~~~you are destined to be a great poet! ! ! My best wishes for your book ~~
Wow, it's an amazing poem.A weary poet is a courageous poet, but when he lose his courage, his soul'll tell the worthy things to him, that's the strength of a poet..it's a great poem...top marks 10++++
i love your all poems sir and indeed you have a good observation which reflects in your work. wishes
A weary poet who is also a courageous poet who willing go through with what needs be written. No matter others opinions, with fear at his backside he still continues write. He is as a stars guiding light. Follow it to find your way home. To a place where your never alone. It is another great write Romeo, Know that I will always be a supporter and a fan. You are a very talented man. So with said and without farther a do, Sincerely Your Friend, John Bastian. P.S. Let Me Know When Your Book Published For I Want To Read It. Thank You.
Such an awesome introspection, well written, great concept. Good Luck to your book. I hope for your best. Best Wishes, Ency Bearis
Again, amazingly written! Much like all of your work Romeo. Like I've said before, I am truly a fan and will be looking forward to purchase your book. I too will be coming out with my second book 'If I Had A Son' by the end of this year. I sincerely wish you nothing but success. I know it will be a HIT! Thanks again for sharing such a wonderful poem! In parting, get some rest, even the great ones get weary(insider) .
Like music once it passed The secret way While going out preserved, Totally undisturbed… .... a music of soul
This is a beautiful piece, all of your works are so fantastic, this poem being among the best, good luck with the publishing of your book!
All poets and artists are truly amazing. Such a diverse group we are. Beautiful writing, I enjoyed this one greatly. I look forward to buying a copy of your book one day.
Wow it sounds very amazing. I really love it, perfect 10+++ great work Sir. Go on Sir I wait every poem of yours anxiously :)
Fantastic wirte, Romeo. The voice gives a fantastic turn to the poem and then your heart lagging a bit behind. Really marveloud images in this very well written poem.
Really, a lovely poem...I've added this poem to the collection I'm preparing for my students next year....if you would allow me to use it to demonstrate how poets present themselves in writing.... Peace to you too Sir...