Monday, February 29, 2016

A Weary Leap Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

In one hour
And twenty one minutes
My alarm will go off
And tell me that it's time to wake up
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Mike Smith
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Brian Mayo 01 March 2016

Your casual writing style is so similar to mine that I have to confess, I'm a little freaked-out. Naturally, I like what you've written. The poet's ability to write a smooth, coherent, interesting piece concerning sleep does not seem to have been harmed by his lack of it.

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Mike Smith 01 March 2016

Thanks Brian. I always enjoy reading your comments (and poems for that matter) . Likely because of that similarity you've pointed out. I can usually last a night or two of little sleep before suffering much loss in the way of productivity or mental capacity. Work or recreation

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Souren Mondal 01 March 2016

Awake 05: 14? ? That is me about everyday until about a half-year ago, when the doctor finally gave me pills for anxiety, insomnia, and depression.. I feel far better now, but there are often times when I miss those nights spent being awake.. One of the best feelings in the world is to look at the night gradually change into day.. I hope you did not have too much of a headache Mike.. Have a nice day [It's evening here in India.. I am not sure what time it would be in Polo.. But since it should be around 08: 30-09: 00 at New York, I would take the risk and say good morning mate, have a nice day ahead of you: -) ]

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Mike Smith 01 March 2016

I've had my bouts with insomnia as well. I can say it was not something I enjoyed but rather endured. Fortunately, by virtue of developing a schedule, I think I've overcome it. Although sometimes it peeps its nose back into my life from time to time, but usually (and thankfully) only briefly. Also you are correct. Your evenings are my mornings. New York is an hour ahead of us. For easy reference point, Chicago time is what Kelly and I are on. Though his schedule is far more nocturnal than mine. Thanks Souren

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Wes Vogler 29 February 2016

When you don't sleep you get up and read a book or write some trite poetry or, in my case draw. However, I am retired and can do this at will. We sometimes take a brandy. Big inducement to slumber. My wife is sometimes a fitful sleeper. Sympathy is offered.

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Kelly Kurt 29 February 2016

That is how I feel every day! ! : -) Except the young part. Take a nap, but not so long that tonight is a repeat performance. Attitude can overcome fatigue...... mostly?

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Mike Smith 29 February 2016

Yes it (mostly) can. And I think I'll skip the nap. After a pleasant day at work, I'm revitalized aside from a bit of a headache, and (as mentioned) a case of heavy eyes. Thank you Kelly

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