A Weak Spot Comments

Good moral....makes you think.......

Yes this is good herbert, is the moral of the story watch your back i personly would have had the wench on top, , therefore protecting my back i enjoyed this poem and it was a poem, not a short story i myself have only got to this poem, i was having my bit of fun for the day keeping everone awake with my barking, and my little dog tricks counting my number ones Warm regards herbert Allan

I echo Pradeep's comments. Very well done.

Beautiful poem.Loved it.Thank you.