Thursday, April 21, 2005

A Wayward Life Comments

Rating: 4.0

Born out of wedlock,
with a chip on his shoulder,
one that was as big,
as a cliff face, boulder.
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sylvia spencer
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Michael Gale 07 March 2006

A sad story that a lot of people go through.Going astray from the narrowed proper path.I'm just glad i found my way before i could even have a chance to stray. Others have trouble with the law, except for me.Those who hav not had trouble in life should be glad they have not. A good poem. My hat goes off to you. Best regards.

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Anna Russell 28 February 2006

A touching read on a sadly all too common subject. Hugs Anna xxx

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Duncan Wyllie 25 February 2006

I wish there was a way for people to see before they get lost in the maze of curcumstance. Thankyou for this, you have shown us what a great artist you really are.Love Duncan

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Graham Jones 23 February 2006

A great poem Sylvia and a good meesage to others well done Reagards Graham.

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Mary Nagy 27 April 2005

As always, a wonderful poem Sylvie. I always enjoy reading your work. Sincerely, Mary

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Scarborough Gypsy 27 April 2005

This is great Sylv. Some kids stay kids for ever don't they? Glad you're back Gyp's

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Linda Preston 23 April 2005

what a well told story. I like the chip as a big as a rock face line. Nice one.

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