A Way Of Memory Comments

A lovely piece. Enjoyed this very much.

a lovely write about a memory. I see my life in it- what a presence of her.

i like the ryme on lines 9 and 10

I really like this one...good write keep it up

I think its pretty good dude

I love Magaret's view on how the mood can reflect seet the reflection of memories. the poem gives an very nice idea of the memories of our senses and this is great because it moves way from the cerebral which I belives gives it a sensual connection rather than an intelectual one between humans. you really paint an amazing picture of the human senses and the powers the have in creating our perception of reality. more importatly I like that the sensuality represented in your poem is not neurotic and radically spontanious and animalist but is rather reflectve, which gives the impression then senses inthemselves have an intelectual capacity of their own. I hope this all makes sense, Its a wonderful and poem with controlled emotions and that is what makes it so enjoyable, its not heavy unlike most sentimental poems.

Nice work! But, ... From Her View She likes his shirt and jeans, And what those flowers mean. But, if the time has not yet been, Her signal will never be green. -from GOD BLESS NOT ONLY AMERICA

Memories can be beautiful depending on your mood.I feel the colour and the way this reflects through your poem makes this an enjoyable piece of art.10

This is a very nice piece!

this is really good, i love it!

i see life in it captures the attention.09

This is beautiful. The thing of memories it never allows you to forget! Splendid piece...