Thursday, June 13, 2013

A Way Of Life Comments

Rating: 3.3

With their lamps at their side,
Still weary and tired,
From the previous shift,
Hence they came,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 March 2022

Extremely well written! A magnificent poem....just beautiful.

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Jayne Davies 24 June 2013

Thank you so much Patricia!

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Patricia Grantham 22 June 2013

Another good write Honorable Poet. Working in the coal mine was hard grueling and dirty work. The men who did this kind of work had to care for their families. They would give all they got to do this and be happy about it. Enjoyed!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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