Saturday, February 17, 2007

A Wave Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sweeping down like a cold winter's storm,
your smile caught me unaware.
Like a great wave it cast me high upon its crest
to ride joyously, yet uncertainly,
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Shelly Price
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Laurie Hill 12 April 2014

An excellent read. The voyage of emotions so aptly painted by your words.

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Gavin Shaw 26 August 2007

I think that your poem is as vivid and as lurid as a sunrise, it holds a wise clarity, I think that the sea is the perfect poetic piece, it hold such a love and music quality, and seems to inspire kinship beside herself. Being myself, I do not place poems on the internet anymore, but if you would like me to send you some poems or if you would like to send me some poems, please send me some.....native_rain@hotmail.com It is not everyday I find a new poet that I like or admire.

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Aldo Kraas 17 February 2007

This poem is excelent You did a god job Congratulations

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