A Watery Wisdom Comments

Nice poem. From the soil, we have originated and to thus we will ultimately return. For nature is composed of the same core elements fundamental to all organisms. 'A watery wisdom' that seeps down into the Earth to be recycled. Fundamental priniciples. Lovely read.10+

deep, to read new trace. fluid woderful.

dear vaibhav, who inspires you to write such wonderful lines? i am amazed you write so well, with the wisdom of a seer.god bless you always. ritty

This has depth and a meaning which a few shall understand.may take a lifetime...keep em coming

Vaibhav you could tell a lot in few words. But consider changing 'losing numerous shapes' to taking numerous shapes'. Just a freindly suggestion. But this is a very good theme u have dealt with so well.

True, wisdom has no relation with life. The life is ever new and fresh to enjoy. CP

simple nice.. you you. i started writing a poem called wisdom.. today.. interesting eh..

its deep fathomless that watery wisdom -10 anjali

nicely constructed a truth. shan

deep....and beautiful. loved it. loses its shape...yes, but regains its form. thank you dost.

A wisdomful write......Keep writing and thanks for sharing this one. Best Wishes Naseer

this is a nice thought provoking one indeed....thanks for the words of wisdom..nice write... regards shan

watery or not...wisdom must stay...must prevail...good thought out write

Deep and profound...........a well crafted small poem with enough essence

profound thought in those four lines....10

Well said Vaibhav....great piece 10

profound thoughts....lovely poem..........10+++