A Watery Secret. Comments

Lovely message in this very strong write...enjoyed the read....thank you...Fi

I love the pace, the rhythm goes to my head and I tilt my ear to listen to the symphony that Stoat, Vole and Otter detect that I may bathe in that river streaming the smiles and sighs of years long since gone. I've got the time. Thank you, Fay, thank you for giving us a write truly worthy of our time. Mark 10+

Great write Fay! your handling of syntax and rythym in this piece is awesome. A deep and lovely poem

I too, am a passing bird tilting an eye at what you write. This is, of course, an easy 19, and I like watery secrets of all kinds. Hxx

The reader can image this scene wonderfully, peaceful feelings can be felt in these words you have expressed…thank you. Scott

Wondrous streams of thought flowing from your pen Fay.

This is a unique and fascinating perspective on love. If life is a flowing stream then we, with all our loving, swim together in that stream and join our singing with every other living creature. Beautifully written and very well titled.

The river of time is full of secret watery sounds, if we dare to listen.......10/10.

Thank you Rachel - - - - glad it appealed to you and that the lines mentioned resounded........

Yes we should learn and this poem deserves mor than I can give it Fay 10++++++ Chris