A Water Melon's Truth Comments

A great write, flowing smooth and fruitful. A red seedless slice of delight.

Love the flow and rhyming, well penned

Beautiful write. Sweet and juicy 10+

Roving back through wild centuries...Beautiful

An intresting and intriguing piece. Thanks for sharing such a simple and elegant work

Thank you for taking tge time to read and comment on my work. Have a wonderful weekend

I really never loved water melon but I have changed my perception after reading this poem. Beautiful piece

Excellent poem. Great theme. Thank you, dear poet. anjandev roy.

A good work to be appreciated like the sweetness of a watermelon. Thank you dear poet....10

Aloha yoonoos... Cheers and thank you for yet another fine recall of the waning times...09' was not fine... embittered world a truth punching line... and yet from all of the human experiences to this daze and times... not one body human has made a difference in the overall H.D. I subject of that 'world peace' thingy... Who is to blame? Somebody or everybody? You make the call... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

Somebody has to do it, why not watermelon, eh? Maybe our gene pool will catch up to fruit one day. Good work, ric

A water melon still conceives/What alone bears peace-a sweetheart...lovely poetic expression! A wonderful poem! I vote this magnificent piece of poetry with a 10

Each slice for life time sweet, Munch you as you would grapes or kisses. Her only hope, wish for nothing on earth Save eternal be her internal love's season, ever juicing the embittered world. Touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

Life is a bitter experience biut it's love that comes forward as a water melon to make it sweet. A true love is in the nucleous of all good deeds that lead us to love's eternal sweet season. A poem of beautiful thoughts, nicely penned.

nice description on water melon- At rust and ripeness time To land blood wet, martyrs fed, A water melon still conceives superb 10+++

A water melon still conceives What alone bears peace-a sweetheart, Summer's blood, timber scent- - Glad that i found my way here... A water-melon is always perfect in its shape and is such a self-sufficient existence. Sweet at heart.

A simple beautiful day. Water mellon coming your way. Good one, ric

(Not really for the name) I love the title! Although as a child I don't get the actual poem itself.

nice poem keep it up wish you good luck, blessings and best wishes.

Spectacular work, full of depth and rich imagery, pure perfection of words.