A Water Lord Comments

Great subject and well handled. I too am inspired by nature and particulalry water life, I 've got one on the go about mayflies at the momntt - but unlike yours, its not quite right yet. Thoroughly enjoyed this, Patrickxx

I enjoyed every aspect of this poem, brilliant! 10 from me, love duncan X

Excellent Sylvia, I see your wb has disappeared and your work is flowing freely. This poem reminds me of my Swan King poem. Beautiful. x

Praise for your wonderful word painting of a dragronfly. Beautiful poem, Sylvia. Warm regards, Sandra

I could picture this Water Lord from such a lovely description you have rendered here. A delightful poem and a pleasure to read it. Thank you for composing it. Love Ernestine XXX

I do not really know how to appreciate an insect. Since young I have always had the impression that flys of all sort were irritants, your poem was so beautiful it taught me how to appreciate them through the eyes of a poet! Great write! ! !

Yet another superbly crafted piece Sylvia.

Beautiful descriptive writing and a fitting tribute to a magnificent insect.

.. What a wonderful fanciful portrait you have crafted here, Sylvia! Excellent smooth read. Description is oustanding! Wonderful title. Deanna xx ..