A Water Jug Comments

good symbolism there Nizam...the body and soul...and body's fragilty! thanks...10

Beautiful and interesting poem. Written in the light and enrapturing way. It is flowing during the reading.

Beautiful subtle, delicious written poem. You are an unusually sensitive man, which feels a lot, and you can describe it competent. It is moving and it is bringing up, it is stimulating the imagination. I read with pleasure. (10 v.) Greetings. MBK

an interesting way of writing about the man..well said

Interesting and true, man however can also repair the jug, that is if he repents and is willing to start on lifes journey once again, renewed in spirit and resolve.

very interesting poem! and i guess that the water jug fills up as you are getting older...