A Wasted Self Comments

you waste yourself in your poetry.

Again your uniqueness shines. Very nice.

This is a unique piece because that is really what you strive for so as not to lose yourself among the other humans, water to flood, wind to storm deep and profound. voted a 7

Seems you are an Asamanyan... To confine oneself within One should have a vision within To have a vision within One should have scope within To have a scope within One has to be Human. Good subject. Thank you.

You may say it a cognitive dissonance. we all have a thought like this in different shape. 'At last we say, we came, lived and suffered together.'

a write in philosophic lines... gives impressive read...10

Very powerful I like how you put this poem great piece Krista

wow.. wonderful piece....extends a very beautiful message for us...for perfection...excellent thoughts to come out with this great piece...a piece that signifies a good person... waste ourselves but into perfection...waste ourselves for the welfare of all...

Finding self and purpose in Life can sometimes take a Lifetime, it is the question in all minds. We exist beyond Human physical limitation. Your poem is thoughtful and questioning it has a nice flow that reads easily. I Like it......10

Superb! To waste oneself for the better..limiting only for humankind! Great concept..Great message! Truly a piece of art!

good poem of remorse. tell us your biography, please

The power of a wasted self. Let us waste ourselves so that the world would be a better place. I like this poem.

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a beautiful poem twisting words wasting wasting wasting -where do I start---what do I become? nicely penned +++++++10 regards anjali I think ill take this to my fav list