The rainy season is about to go,
I had written a message on the clouds,
I spread alcoholic beverage on the clouds,
The wind carried the clouds long ago.
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'Absence makes the heart grow fonder'! I feel that this temporary absence is in a way good! How many poems you could write on almost the same topic, Akhtar ji!
An amazing beauty through out the poem....................10
Oh my gosh! this is so full of amazing description, it's like a walk through a wet forest taking in all it has to offer and enjoying the beauty and the energy of natures bliss. I'm taken in by you ability to form such beautiful poetry enticing the reader to come in and sip the beauty and after sipping take a long drink and enjoy. You touch the soul with your words and sooth the heart, I love your work so beautiful and tranquility unfolds here...Thank you brother poet.....