A Wasted Love? Comments

quit touching poem. Can love be wasted, Erode with neglect? fay i love it

Very beautiful poem.....makes one think..... with their heart........

beautiful your poem really moved me it was amazing well done 10 from me

Friend when one has had true love in their life it is never wasted, for some part of that love remains within and is always there, even should new love come alongit will shine alongside adding strength and growing more powerful, I wish it for you 10 ++ Chris

Love is the most hotly debated feeling in poems, and I loved this poem because it shows me another point which I usually ignore deliberately as I am always on alert to defend love.

Love is as natural as waking and sleeping. It is the rising of the sun and the warm cloak of night.Love is fierce and vengeful, slaying all who come in contact with it inflicting wounds that never heal.Love is never valued until lost.Love has the brevity of the assassins knife to pierce the heart and spill blood. Love inflicts pain when it is transferred to another. Love is life.....and death. Sid xxx

If it is love, then it is love, if it is not love, it will not live.10/10

a beatiful rhythm and an age old message with out typographical errors How do you do it? jimxx

If even the smallest spark of love remains, it can be chafed into a flame.It endures all things. Excellent write. Always your friend, Sandra

Love must be Nurtured and grown, Love must never be taken for granted or never said or shown, a little love each day keeps in ever home.. Andrew 10

Hello poet Fay. A wonderful description of love and a delightful read! Loyd

Never waste a bit and fly.Thought provoking and true Fay.Best regards.Kev x

Love like water, will find it's level

Some magnificent lines: 'Crumbling, loves debris/Crashes through hopes' is superb. 'Duty then treads on the /Heels...' is an insightful and oh so true verse. The words of a wise lady so eloquently arranged. S :)