(a) ...Wasted In Time Comments

Ammmmazing piece.....astonishing flow......10+

so revealing yet, so fancy to live life we take is just a little bit..... a waste of time iam so in love of this poem..... touching my heart... a waste of time... my dear... hope.... i can take it... thank you....God bless...a 10+

for a moment of your breathe theres nerve that receive a gift for every blink of your eye theres something you miss for every tick of a clock is like water drip on a rock so then sigh not of passing time though it doesn't ring your chime salamat kandis. cheer up.md

As interesting as the others You have a clear way with these words Smooth thinking you possess Equally as pleasing

Candice - Wasted in time is a very thoughtful poem which has got me pondering....... Good work! Cheryl

an absolutely stunning vision of this endless merry-go-round of life....fantastic piece