Tuesday, May 19, 2009

A Waste Comments

Rating: 2.5

Tears streaming down my face
My life a complete waste
A waste of Blood
A waste of Air
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Lizzie Resendiz
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oh my, what a scene! ....i really like this one, it's very strong, and realistic..... keep it up.... (thought you were no good? !)

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Julia Wakeman 22 May 2009

even if you do not consider suicide and cutting yourself this poem has powerful emotions. 'A waste of blood, air, and skin' no one is a waste. well written

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Lizzie Resendiz

Lizzie Resendiz

Samson, AL
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