The young warriors
Danced around the flames
As they celebrated life
While the elders
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A Thematically strong work greatly executed, it felt timeless in away that I could picture this two hundred years ago, and maybe now even now, or maybe even two hundred years into the future. Its a beautiful picture of a way of life that I have never seen. I think you did a good job of honouring them Kaila, and maybe even the future.
Amazing, just as always mind is blown away. also there is a typo- says my follow by mistake. My follow chief's and warriors. still loved it!
Hello poet friend Kaila. Your poem reveals an amazing insight into the heart and soul of the warrior. I enjoyed, Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.