A Warrior's Poem Comments

10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 amazing poem

I agree with Brandy, otherwise, it shows clearly you great poetic talent! Just remember that punctuation is very important in order for you to control your writing and catch the reader's attention with a clear message! 10+++ Keep inspiring the world with more of your thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...

nice word choice and flow but i think punctuation would fill your poem with more fluency. i like the idea behind it but an unpunctuated poem is like giving someone a house without an entrance. really nice and beutiful but missing something important.