I see a tundra filled with sparkling white.
I squint my eyes at it's dazzling allure.
And I wonder if it would be alright
If I were to hope to see it once more.
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I have to say, the melancholy is dirge-like. The imminent demise of the Romantic beauty is astounding in such a young poet. Well-done. I'd like to read it again after a hard edit.
A love lost is a moment of endless sentiment! Your hidden recherché of instinct, has majestically intertwined with a moment of unforgettable imagination. Best wishes.
Congrats William. Loved those mesmerizing lines- - - Maybe one day I could summon the strength To confess to her in the Winter heat That one day we could, together, at length Enjoy long moments where our eyes would meet.
Wonderfully worded poem. Also, congrats on being voted as 'poem of the day! Well-deserved.
I have read your bio very impressive. Keep up the nice work. excellent poetry. You are quite a young man. congrats.
lovely poem...It is the warmth in us that keeps the spark of life alive...otherwise we are as good as dead...well done! Keep up the warmth and keep enlivening PH...
Hi William Blake Beckett, Wonderful sonnet, very nicely written about 'tundra'.
emotions are spoken in terms of temperature! Nice poem!
Warmth that is coming from this poem is great and nice. well done.
Your eyes would meet one day. Sweet