Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, July 21, 2010

A Warm Welcome Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have touched me like high speed wind
I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find
It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip
Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Darshna Chopra 04 August 2010

You have touched me like high speed wind I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep.... nice feeling with warmth......10

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Chand Shikari 21 July 2010

You teased me to bring very close As if you wanted something to disclose......something to disclose... lovely talk indeed///////////10

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Maulin Shah 21 July 2010

It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep......what a beautiful piece....10

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Lady Grace 21 July 2010

You have touched me like high speed wind I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep As you closed on to paste the warm welcome The whole world seemed to have nearly come I was wondering what it was all about It was slow whispering and not big shout... i like the presentation of this..it is full of sense...brief, short and rhymed is nicer dear than lengthy poem...sometimes, due of too much words, the thought is already lost so, better like this...hope u r fine....very nice presentation...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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