Saturday, May 16, 2009

A Warm Smile Comments

Rating: 4.7

Love has placed a smile on my face,
Lighting upon it the bright grace
Of heaven, my heart did embrace.
In me, tenderness comes in place
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009

Smile says much ...’smile n’ profile’... Nice poem …10 MS. NIVEDITA UK

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Kylie Lowe 03 November 2009

very beautiful peice =]

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Anand Madhukar 11 September 2009

A gentle piece wrapped in a warm feeling of contentment.

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Vijay Gupta 15 August 2009

Good expression of love & passion. also read my new poem 'Keep the tears away'. Thanks a lot.

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James Mclain 07 July 2009

Warm smiles are made in heavan..to hold one is speacial..never let it go..iip

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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009

I so love this heartwarming write! thanks for sharing! : -)

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Love has a special place in all we do. Well said and I can read your mind.

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Indira Renganathan 29 June 2009

A steadfast love with a warm smile long lasting at heart....love poem eternal

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 20 June 2009

Love has placed a smile on my face. In me, warmness has found a place, .... Lovely lines, so very well expressed. All this skill, all wisdom - what are they good for? They are good only because love has placed such a smile..... Thanks for sharing this gorgeous poem.

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Kee Thampi 17 June 2009

ble poem you write Love has placed a smile on my face. In me, warmness has found a place, In a place, where strong passion lays. My heart, where my notes of love says, This warm feeling from my heart’s base Will always lift me to find ways

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Jasbir Chatterjee 31 May 2009

Wish you all the best, Obinna, I hope the warm smile remains on your face and the love you found also stays with you through your lifetime.

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

well I lost the girl who love me like crazy...and now i feel so lost...this is a nice write indeed..but bring backs bittersweet memories though...thanks sir

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Noha El3wdy 29 May 2009

i really enjoyed reading it. simple and touching

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Sherif Monem 29 May 2009

Very beautiful sweet poem.

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Wenona Raysan Empedad 28 May 2009

seems like you were very in love when you wrote this.. i couldn't relate though, because i am very heart broken.. still i envy this poem.. i wish i could feel the same.. very nice.. expresses love in every way.. :)

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John Kay 26 May 2009

it is actual love in every word... verses come back to life in your lines... delighted

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Lovely poem Obinna. The passion and warm love matches perfectly A Warm Smile. The last line confirming the love you hold for another. 10 Karin Anderson

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Jack Price 21 May 2009

Charming poem. If I was passing a poem along to a lady, this would be the one. Well written with a passionate ending. thanks for the write!

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Bright Rose 21 May 2009

lovely poem, naturally rhymed, so artistic

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Warm love is presented nicely,10++

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