Sunday, June 18, 2006

A War Song! Comments

Rating: 4.8

I see the soldiers marching on
Singing a cold war song
On the road they hold onto their guns
As the fighting goes on all day long
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Bob Blackwell 09 November 2008

Sylvia, your song beats well and more importantly shows us all the futility of war. Bob

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Indira Renganathan 12 August 2008

Great concept, nice write..I like this poem.Thanks for sharing

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David Desantis 07 May 2008

very nice, i like the constant drumming of it all, no matter rain or shine, fight on fight on...great stuff here Sylvia

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Jimi Doyle 18 June 2006

sun or rain... great poem... how do we stop it? hhhmmmm?

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