A War Inside My Mind Comments

WOW I love it. This poem embodies what I ave been feeling for several years. I refuse to take my life but somehow I find enough strength to move forward. I love it!

haha i guess im weak. Tried suicide once but no luck. God didnt want me to go so easily. But nice poem though ^.^ -Ellie

'Suicide is for the weak', ; it is heroic to struggle, to fight until death comes naturally.

Hi Kevin, it's nice to read your poem. It's natural, and you could arrange such common things in a lovely way! Nice...

You actually remind me of myself. I too write a lot of angst, its a great relief to get it out on pen. My way of therapy too. I now try and write happy thoughts but its something I can't relate to as much. Your a good poet keep it up, and keep your pen closer than your enemies.

i like it n i agree with ya tht suicide is 4 weak ppl...n i almost lost some1 who tryed 2 kill herself i'll make her read this pretacular sentence! ! gd job :) 10++

Perplexity of mind in well understanding words....mindful

I really like this poem. It's different from anything else I've ever read in a good way. Keep up the really awesome work.

Again, I am right: You are a strong and a brave individual. We are always at odds with ourselves and your art is your salvation and your saving grace. Remember that: you will never be insane :)

i like your style, nice one keep it up xx

I think this really well written. You get the point across clearly without losing any sort creative sense. Nice work :)

you write very good poems

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wow, you are really good, very true to.

Wow that is a very strong and moving poem. i think in one way or another weve all been there. nive writing

its good and i liked it alot.........well written

i like this one....and thanks for commenting on poems ur pretty good...love ur poems

full of feeling. anyway, ask god.