Sunday, January 25, 2009

A Wanta Be Father Comments

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you finally relized u let me down.
when u told me you'd be around.
Now you want another chance.
to pick it up and be a man.
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LaVon Clayton
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Surya . 22 June 2009

beautifull and touching poem. nice words too. posted10 surya

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Brittany Gorski 10 February 2009

this is sooo good. I can relate to this poem. My dad had been in jail for most of my life so he was a horrible father but things are looking up...i hope for the same for you

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LaVon Clayton

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