A Wandering Dream (Haiku) Comments

Oh yes! Charming and beautiful :) I like it too.

Very beautiful and charming haiku. I like it.

A fine expression of love and affection.

These rainbow winged doves wandering between my heart and your azure eyes so beautiful in short verses and quiet good imagery.. all colours passing uickly in eyes givng good aim in life.. i loved it....10 read mine colour....brown eyes.. two bright eyes

A beautiful haiku....very imaginative too