Monday, February 16, 2009

A Wanderer's Story Two (Sarabande Gala) Comments

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(dedicated to Mr. John Tiong Chunghoo, a poet friend at poemhunter)

frangipani fold the same valley in
over another shines shooting stars
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 February 2009

This is where the poem is ahmad; ; ; ; some stars were golden and some were pure silver all were blown to such a tune aspiring sweetly like a flower

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Chitra - 19 February 2009

Very well worded with emotion showing through

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Anthony Foster 17 February 2009

I can smell it, feel it and I love it the words and the timeless place and feeling that they convey.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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