A Wanderer’s Song Comments

Let the wandering hearts beware of the consequence.A lovely write.

A lovely depiction by cautioning a situation ending with a message.

Beautifully written David!

Accurate depiction of loving and leaving, but never staying to claim your immature mistakes and right them. Leaving children without fathers to help raise them. Good portrayal of lessening morals in society. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. RoseAnn

A beautiful poem with a good advice....

The evenings certainly do go to soon, love the tune of this song

beware of wandering hearts/. a good poem

Oh dear, the fruits of Springtime it would seem!

Wonderer's song in spite of many risk is really wonderful so lovely lovely to read and think

Wonderful song of caution to careless hearts! Thanks.

Hello David very interesting should be on the curriculum as a warning to both girls and boys well done

Wanderer never sticks to a fixed life. A lovely song warning all those who may be affected.

For reckless 'love', there can be grave consequences! So one should be on one's guard not to be lured by wild and unlawful passions of the flesh! A gentle but stiff warning! Enjoyed this poem, a little different from your usual write! !

A great poem, it's great to be a wonderer but everything has a price.

A wanderer's song so beautifully sung! An appropriate word of caution for the 'young maidens' who 'go to the ground'.