Tuesday, September 29, 2009

A Waltz Wave: Loaf Of Bread Comments

Rating: 3.0

Loaf
of bread
makes
a song
...
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Kerry O'Connor 14 October 2009

Another excellent poem full of taste and texture.

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Lillian, I love it! It is wonderful to read a Waltz Wave where I have not had to count the syllables. The fragrance and the three alliterated words waft winds with make for a great Waltz Wave. And there is a message in there too for the world. Some of the convicts that came to Australia from England in the early 1800's had only stolen a loaf of bread so they wouldn't starve. Well done! 10 love Karin

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