A Waltz Wave: Gathering Wildflowers (Rewrite) Comments

I think I've commented on this one on another site...It still leaves me with the pleasurable feeling of having shared this walk and smelled these smells. Very well written. I like the sense of ambling your words produced so well.

Living in a big city this makes me ache with longing for those 'sun drenched fields'. A lovely and gentle pastoral scene with the accompanying bliss portrayed so well.

Seems like an informal style of poetry, but nice to read and ponder on... Regards Naseer

'Her lap filling with ev'ry hue and scent' Rachel Ann Butler