A Waltz Wave: Fall Leaves Fly Comments

Good this! Read mine - Leave Leaves - Adeline

Lillian, I came here to revisit some of your poems...this Waltz Wave is a fine one.

I also wante to fly like these leaves. U moved my mind with ur poem... nice, excellent, fantastic but so simple imagination....

This wonderful poem waltzes along at a breathtaking pace, drawing the reader into the swirl of of autumn leaves as the bus rolls along. You certainly know how to use this strict syllable count to optimum effect. S :)

Simply captivating Lillian. I is like a long haiku that leaves one with a breathlessness of capturing something so beautiful that others pass by without ever knowing what they have missed out seeing. 10 love Karin

I love this..A nice write! ! !

A sweet melodic picture to my mind.

A fine example of this form. You have really made it your own. This is a beautifully poignant word picture.

slim; compact; deliberate; speedy - and it goes away, like the falling leaves of fall, a blur - bot only temporary, temporarily. Much enjoyed this, Lillian,10, not a blur; a real ten, more than 9.999 - a real 10 mark

very nice atmosphere...season changing....time passing....

Wow, this brief, concise little poem really brings the feeling of Fall alive. Nice!