A Waltz Wave: Dream Of Fishes Comments

I like the 'ins' in this 'hang on to your dreams poem, ' Lillian, where the 'ins' separate and bind, and it's a good take, mis-take notwithstanding, not even when fish schools knife through the stream

Lillian, you have introduced all the superlative imagery of your haiku to this waltz wave form and created an undeniably magnificent poem! S :)

Does a moonbeam thrash and writhe like an eel? lovely poem - thank you

lovely...beautiful imagery...by mistake catching the moon beam was superb...10

Enjoyed this very much indeed...