A Waltz Of Blue Smiles Comments

Thank you dear friend, yes that is what I meant, you are right, true, there is not such word all wrong, yet my intention was to express a crying out of rules, could I be forgiven for two o instead of one? To me that moment that was the sound I felt. Distorted heart at times may be right to distort a sound, was only a howl... I appreciate the correction, I will try to fix it. Thank you, I really appreciate your help. Love and smiles, Elena

oh, no, dear lady.. did you mean to write losing instead of loosing -the latter is not derived from the noun loss which is what you meant, perhaps...

Sad to lose ones home hence the blues for sure the poem really means more than it says and blue is the straw to cling onto, enjoyed...regards

Friend, you are really bringing tears in my black eyes reading these pain evoking tears in the deep blue eyes. Each house is beautifully decorated with life sketches.No body in this world should loose their dreams. Let us cling to our dreams tightly, firmly and facing life boldly.Beautiful theme :) I must give 10+++ to put off these blue tears :)