A Walmart Parking Lot Comments

That's what i say too..when all is going bad.pray..then laugh and reach for the notebook and pen...(i've had to use anything i can find to write on, just to write it down and get the poem off my back) ........you made me smile.

To laugh at self....is comedic relief....in its finest hour! Excellent.

Very good. It just goes to show you that things are rarely as bad as they seem. Ron

This is a really fine and typical American poem. A feeling of grandiosity together with solitude. At Walmart's one buys on favourable terms as well.