Monday, September 8, 2008

A Wall Of Fire Comments

Rating: 3.0

I tell it to go to there.
It won't.
I tell it to find me information one hundred times.
One hundred times it comes back empty-handed.
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Greenwolfe 1962 08 September 2008

This is a simple writing about a simple thing and I cannot recommend it for the readers. I find no creativity or special characteristics of an outstanding poem. This is not a bad thing, it just isn't a good thing. GW62

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