A Wall In Time Comments

I once went back to view the house where I lived until I was eight, but somehow it just wasn't as I remembered it to be, so much smaller and with added bits to house and garden. I was rather upset really, you can never go back, time changes things. Loved this poem very much, it brought back memories. Love Ernestine XXX

Great poem Ray! I know exactly how you feel..........It's nice that you're expanding into the free verse. This is wonderful. sincerely, Mary