Monday, February 27, 2012

A Walkman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Somebody goes on way in light,
He takes his heart inside a bag,
He needs no lie, no stupid fight,
He is one`s love, has wings on back.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Pheko Motaung 05 March 2012

A superb magnificent poem! You're brilliant!

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Kaia Grønnbæck 05 March 2012

A lovely poem. Beautifully written!

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Sagar Shelar 28 February 2012

Very strange kind of poem. A walkman...... who is he?

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Harindhar Reddy 28 February 2012

hugger-mugger! hush-hush! I know he is an angel in you, in me. I also he is a spirit in you and in me and you and me. Further there in everyone... What's start to the poem.. Somebody goes on way in light, He takes his heart inside a bag, Yippee! I am always intrigued by your benevolent thoughts to help others - simply superb!

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Wahab Abdul 28 February 2012

Good rhyme and good flow make the poem an exquisite piece of poem, i like it and am giving you 100/100. Keep sharing with us such kind of beautiful poems.

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