A Walk Comments

The Spirit of hope, alive in the everyday events of life. Beautiful.

Second stanza: surely it should read " and changes us" . At least two typos.

in the 5th line, shouldn't the word be changes rather than charges?

Nice poem...I enjoyed it....a great poem...........10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Mechanical reading without passions.

I love to teach this poem

This inner light charges them into something else.

The meaning and theme of the poem is good. It would be bettear to have juxtaposition of original poem.

This is such a good poem. Very tranquil and pure.

Inner light! ! Peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Such an inspiring poem posted and shared here👍👍👍

I feel the translator has let this poem down.

This makes my life worth carrying about.

we know there is something more? besides rain.

Very spiritual and elevating

..........still a beautiful poem, even with the wrong word usage...

I love how he worded this. So we are grasped by what we cannot grasp... I wish that one day I could write like this! (or at least half as good)

a nice poem...i like it

A terrible translation! H

I must say that the observations made by Jagannath Rao Adukuri immediately elevated my appreciation of this poem; here is an instance where reader commentary has great value, and I am grateful to those who take the time to add insightful impressions. I agree that Nick Bronson's modifications make sense, but considering Adukuri's reading of personification, I see meaning in the translation as it stands, as well. I wonder if anyone has found an alternate translation...?